Concentration Statement
For my concentration I created a story with two dolls. The story is made humorous by the use of dolls, but the lighting and layout tell a sincere story of two people. The story shows how both "people" start out being lonely and desperate, and they end up finding each other and becoming friends. I used eye level in the photos to make the dolls seem more human sized and real. By shooting photos from the doll's eye level it doesn't make them appear so small. Also, the natural lighting further humanizes the dolls because its clearly outside, because these figures swould not normally be found outside. For principals of design I am focusing on texture, leading lines, color, light, and space. I've chosen this idea because I have seen a lot of people I love go through this same situation.
I really like your new concentration theme, I like the colors of the dolls and how you actually created a story with them, one thing I think I would change would to brighten the colors, but that's just me. I really like your final image where they are holding hands, super cute! You did a great job!!
ReplyDeletedamn girl! these are so freaking cool! they're slightly creepy...but in the best possible way! you did a really great job with finding pictures that went really well together. I really like the one that is second to last; I really like how the boy is in focus and the girl isn't. Props lady!
ReplyDeleteHonestly your picturs amazing me! They tell a great story. They are all super clear and have good color. I really admire you for these. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThe lighting is so strong in all the pictures, it shows off the great texture and detail. I also love the color in all the pictures.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are amazing. The dolls are creepy, but in a great way. Super cute! The only thing I might change is the order of your photos. Other than that, great job! Color, mood and texture were fantabulistic!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, dolls scare me but your pictures are amazing! Its cute how you set them up and super clear. AMAZING JOB ZOE!
ReplyDeleteI really like your choice of story to describe with these dolls. It can be a bit difficult sometimes, especially if they're not human, but you did a good job! I really like how you took a variety of pictures including different angles and bringing out the texture of the dolls. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a wonderful job bringing out the character and loneliness of the male doll, especially in the picture where hes standing all alone by the fence. The two dolls are beautiful and look awesome together. It's a really touching theme and your subject matter conveys the material so well. I'm very impressed.
ReplyDeleteyour theme was super creative and unbelievable. I think it's great that you used dolls to tell a story. It kind of reminds me of romeo and julliet, except your dolls don't die. Your pictures look great, and they have good editting
ReplyDeleteThis is a really unique idea. The texture and variety in each shot is fab. The entire series is just the right amount of creepy for the subject matter--without going over the top. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI think you did very well in your final photos of your concentration. They are all really strong and have great texture. You have a good eye in photography and keeping the photos as clear as possible. The dolls tell a great story. good job:)
ReplyDeleteYour pictures are so very interesting! I enjoyed going through them. Their is a clear story being told, which I love. The only thing that I noticed is the second to last picture is a bit blurry
ReplyDeleteI love your theme, it tells a story very clearly. I love your objects you used, and the lighting is great! Over all, its fantastic!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used dolls in your photos. It's very unique. You have great lighting and it seems to me that you really went out of your way to take pictures at odd, but appropriote, angles. Love it!
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